WWW:
- Looking over your blog, I am pleased that you have made a really good start on all Evaluation questions Chris
- There are some good attempts to make posts visual in some way, and your written comments show a generally good grasp of what each question requires of you
EBI:
- To improve, and move that standard of your work towards a B grade, you should come back to your posts and continue to develop them Chris.
- I checked Q. 1 and 6 carefully, as these were the 2 that we agreed on in last Monday's lesson. There are some developments that I'd like you to do to improve each...
- Q. 1 is currently Very Good, I think you have made an effective use of Prezi to explore the conventions of thriller films. You should at moving this to 'Excellent' through the inclusion of screen grabs from your own film sequence compared to similar films to really show HOW you have incorporated key conventions in your own work (location / props / cast...etc...) - make what you are saying in this Q relate more to your own opening sequence, and the decsions you and your group made.
- Q. 6. - This is your chance to really show off every element of technology you use on a daily basis in Media Studies Chris. Currently, with just the 18 second clip from your film, you are not showing all of the technical skills you have developed. I think to do this particular Q justice, you really need to use JING (or similar screen casting software) to show and 'talk through' how you make use of a range of technologies in every lesson (opening up Blogger, iMovie to edit, Live Type, importing, etc, etc.....) Use technology to SHOW OFF how you use technology...
- Overall, always think about how you can be as creative as possible in your posts Chris - to achieve the level 4's you will need to gain your B target.
Overall effort for Q. 1 and 6:
GD - I hope you will come back and make improvments
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