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- You have attempted all four posts so far and you have also started to include some supervisual material.
- Good use of clips to back up your points, but I think you could do more of this and make sure you are really explicit as to why they link.
- Mostly good SPAG, but see below.
EBI
- You need to include more detail in all your posts. As we contunie to go through lessons we will give you more ideas to be able to do this, but we do expect a higher level of effort.
- You should include more detail when writing about your target audience, consider also the interests of your audience. Create a profile of your 'ideal' audience member. What do they like to do? What do they buy? How often do they go to the cinema and who with?
- When writing about technologies, think about what blogger and other web sites have allowed you to do that you would not have been able to do before. What have you learned about technology because of this? Think about the recent protests about SOPA and PIPA and link in. If you don't know what they are, look them up :)
- You could improve your supervisual material by using edited clips from your film, rather than rushes (rough ones).
- Some typos, e.g. 'donyt' in Q4.
Remember you will need all your posts to be supervisual, think about how you can do this. I would like you to go beyond more simple methods like prezi and images, I would like you to create a voice over commentary or a mini-documentary to reach level 4.
EFFORT GD (for now as we are in early stages, but more effort and detail will be required)
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